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Let me ask you something – how many times have you scrolled past an ad without even reading it?
Probably too many to count.
And that’s exactly what’s happening to your ads if your headline doesn’t stop people in their tracks.
Most marketers pour all their energy into the visuals and body copy but overlook the first thing people actually read – the headline. And if your headline isn’t compelling, your ad is already dead on arrival.
I’ve spent years testing and refining ad headlines, and I can tell you this: the difference between a forgettable ad and one that gets clicks, conversions, and sales comes down to a few key principles.
Here’s my exact playbook for writing Facebook ad headlines that consistently generate a 2%+ CTR (which, in today’s world of declining attention spans, is a huge win).
1. Speak Directly to the Audience
Your audience doesn’t care about your brand – they care about themselves. So, make it about them.
Good: “Tired of Acne Breakouts? Try This”
Bad: “Introducing Our New Skincare Line”
People respond to direct language that makes them feel seen. Use “you” and “your” to create instant reliability.
2. Use Numbers for Specificity
Numbers make your headline feel real, concrete, and credible.
Good: “5-Minute Skincare Routine for Glowing Skin”
Bad: “Quick Skincare Tips”
A vague claim won’t get clicks, but specific numbers make your offer feel actionable and achievable.
3. Highlight a Clear Benefit
A common mistake? Describing the product instead of explaining why it matters.
Good: “Wake Up to Brighter, Smoother Skin”
Bad: “Hydrating Night Cream with Vitamin C”
People don’t buy products; they buy what the product does for them.
4. Create Urgency
Fear of missing out (FOMO) is real, and a little urgency can make people take action now instead of later.
Good: “Only 24 Hours Left to Save 30%”
Bad: “Our Moisturizer is Now Available”
Phrases like “Limited Time,” “Ends Soon,” and “Last Chance” push people to act fast.
5. Use Curiosity to Pull People In
Humans are wired to crave answers. A well-crafted curiosity gap can skyrocket engagement.
Good: “This One Skincare Mistake is Ruining Your Glow”
Bad: “Try Our Skincare Routine”
Make people feel like they’re missing out on something important, and they’ll want to learn more.
6. Call Out Your Target Audience
When people feel like an ad was written just for them, they’re far more likely to engage.
Good: “For Busy Moms Who Want Clear Skin”
Bad: “Great Skincare for Everyone”
Narrowing your message may feel risky, but specificity converts.
7. Leverage Social Proof
People trust other people more than they trust brands. If thousands of people love your product, show it.
Good: “Join 50,000+ Women Who Swear by This Moisturizer”
Bad: “Our Best-Selling Moisturizer”
Numbers, testimonials, and customer quotes build credibility instantly.
8. Turn Pain Points into Solutions
Most ads make the mistake of jumping straight to the product. But the best ads start with the problem first.
Good: “Tired of Waking Up with Dry Skin? Try This”
Bad: “Hydrating Night Cream Available Now”
Make them feel the problem before offering your solution.
9. Keep It Short and Scannable
People don’t read—they scan. Long headlines get ignored.
Good: “Luxury Skincare, Drugstore Price”
Bad: “High-Quality, Luxury Skincare That Doesn’t Break the Bank”
Seven to ten words max is the sweet spot for readability.
10. Make Bold Claims—But Back Them Up
Strong, confident claims get attention. But only if you can prove them.
Good: “Clear Skin in 7 Days—Dermatologist Approved”
Bad: “Our New Skincare Line Works Fast”
If you make a bold statement, follow it with proof (a study, testimonial, or real-world example).
11. Use Action Words to Drive Engagement
Passive headlines get ignored. Strong verbs make people take action.
Good: “Swipe to See the Glow-Up”
Bad: “Check Out This Skincare Routine”
Lead with action words like “Discover,” “Try,” “Join,” “See,” or “Transform.”
12. Frame It as a Challenge
Challenges activate curiosity and FOMO. They make people want to prove something to themselves.
Good: “Can You Go a Week Without Dry Skin?”
Bad: “Our Hydrating Formula Works Wonders”
Making it feel like a personal challenge encourages engagement.
13. Reference Trends to Stay Relevant
Tapping into viral trends makes your ad feel fresh and timely.
Good: “The Ingredient TikTok Can’t Stop Talking About”
Bad: “Introducing Our New Serum”
Riding trends creates instant curiosity.
14. Use Questions to Spark Curiosity
Questions make people stop, think, and engage.
Good: “What’s the Secret to Baby-Smooth Skin?”
Bad: “Get Softer Skin with Our Formula”
Questions invite people into the conversation, making them more likely to click.
15. Flip Conventional Wisdom
When you challenge what people think they know, they have to click.
Good: “Why Drinking More Water Won’t Fix Your Dry Skin”
Bad: “Stay Hydrated for Healthier Skin”
A counterintuitive statement breaks patterns and makes people curious.
16. Compare Old vs. New
Contrast makes your product stand out.
Good: “Ditch Your Old Sunscreen—This SPF is a Game Changer”
Bad: “Try Our New SPF”
Making something feel fresh and improved encourages action.
17. Use Testimonials as Headlines
People trust real experiences more than marketing speak.
Good: “‘I Haven’t Had a Breakout in 3 Months!’”
Bad: “Try Our Acne-Fighting Formula”
A great testimonial sells the product for you.
Your headline is your first and only chance to grab attention.
Get it wrong, and your ad gets ignored. Get it right, and you’ve already won half the battle.
These are the headline formulas I swear by. Now, it’s your turn.
Go back to your ads. Test these strategies. Watch your CTR climb.
Happy advertising